2.35 - http://eightyearsinazeroth.blogspot.com/2013/02/2-35.html
Riding on the coattails of the back-to-back deaths of Kael’thas Sunstrider and Rage Winterchill, the 25-Man raid team seared with electricity upon our return to the Caverns of Time.
How about “Riding on the high” or “Riding the wave”, riding on the coattails reminds me of Cycotic…
A series of doomguard
I think since doomguard is the title of the mob and not a group that they belong to this would need to be “doomguards”.
re-do
One word.
no-one
Doesn’t require a hyphen, two words.
Blain, Jungard and Abrinish
Going all Sean Connery, nice.
and provided only moderate challenge.
…only a moderate challenge.
they would detonate, a mana bomb taking out nearby players in the process.
Reads a bit off. How about replacing the comma with “as”.
margin-of-error could be mitigated by shadow resistance gear, mana potions.
I don’t think margin of error needs to be hyphenated. Also I’d change the comma to “and”.
Replenishment.
Formatting. I’m assuming this is supposed to be another header and the font size is off.
Frenzied Regeneration…continuing to hop in Bear Form, tanking Kaz’rogal, eating cleaves, burning rage for heals
While I myself don’t recall exactly what happened during this attempt, Frenzied Regen has a 3 minute cooldown (I have no idea why almost every resource says 1.5 seconds) and I doubt a Resto druid in bear form with no healer would be able to tank a raid boss for longer than 20-30 seconds. Not trying to rain on Breginna’s parade here but you might get some druids who read this and go, wtf?
Kaz’rogal, looking at stunned as I at this clutch turnaround
Change the first “at” to “as”.
Regardless of whether we were struggling or enjoying success, Rocraw was a consistent, solid member of the team. And a loyal friend.
Should probably be one whole sentence.
mad-man
One word.
then wipe your hands and move on.
TIL Shawn gets sweaty palms when doing jigsaw puzzles…
Yet when you put the puzzle together
Sounds better as “Yet when you are putting the puzzle together…”