Revised Post: The Thin Yellow Line

2.21 - http://eightyearsinazeroth.blogspot.com/2012/12/2-21.html

fresh off of claiming a victory

Sounds much better without “of”.

absence: He

I could be wrong but I don’t think you need to capitalize after a colon in this instance.

In Vanilla, it was an assumed title – but without making an official statement, officers let their egos grow into TBC, and the result was unpleasant.

Look here Shatner: “In Vanilla it was an assumed title, but without making an official statement, officers let their egos grow into TBC and the result was unpleasant.”

Blain was in charge, and was doing the work necessary to build our raid strategy, and unless the officers wanted his job, they would need to keep their comments to themselves, and stick to the micromanagement of their respective classes.

Periods are ok you know, they don’t bite. "Blain was in charge and was doing the work necessary to build our raid strategy. Unless the officers wanted hi job, they would need to keep their comments to themselves and stick to the micromanagement of their respective classes.

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