intentions that Razorgore put his boot down on.
I see no boots
Doesn’t need to be hyphened.
unleashing a can of arcane whoop-ass into the victim.
When I envision someone release a can of whoop-ass, I picture it on to or upon someone but YMMV.
had to spatially aware
“had to be spatially…”
If you’re a failure of a player, if your reflexes stunk, if you liked to blame your router or latency a lot
“If you were a failure of a player…” to stick with the same tense.