Revised Post: Resurrection Via Apology

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intentions that Razorgore put his boot down on.

I see no boots


Doesn’t need to be hyphened.

unleashing a can of arcane whoop-ass into the victim.

When I envision someone release a can of whoop-ass, I picture it on to or upon someone but YMMV.

had to spatially aware

“had to be spatially…”

If you’re a failure of a player, if your reflexes stunk, if you liked to blame your router or latency a lot

“If you were a failure of a player…” to stick with the same tense.

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I added another piece of art and cleaned up a few sentences here and there.