Revised Post: No Easy Out


Before she commanded legions of Naga into her Coilfang army

Change “into” to “in”

Where’d all the errors go? ;D

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Dunno! I did find a few, on my re-read.

Affinity for, not affinity to.

Fixed a ton of capitalization issues.

Rung in the back of my mind.

“Yup,” vs “Yup”,

Reflecting back on this post several months later, it’s pretty clean. I like this one a lot, actually.