2.30
Before she commanded legions of Naga into her Coilfang army
Change “into” to “in”
Where’d all the errors go? ;D
Dunno! I did find a few, on my re-read.
Affinity for, not affinity to.
Fixed a ton of capitalization issues.
Rung in the back of my mind.
“Yup,” vs “Yup”,
Reflecting back on this post several months later, it’s pretty clean. I like this one a lot, actually.