When I first met Blain, his abrasiveness put me on edge. I questioned Ater’s choice in leaders
As did we all, /snicker
and we were leaved
“leaved” to “left”
What work, I thought to myself, while the hackles continued to gu up.
rumbling while it idled in the center of circular room.
“of a circular room”, “of the circular room” whichever.
and assigned them positioning around the ring as well.
How about change “positioning” to “locations” just to change it up. The previous sentence has positions as well as the following one.