Revised Post: Blain Returns

2.22 -

When I first met Blain, his abrasiveness put me on edge. I questioned Ater’s choice in leaders

As did we all, /snicker

and we were leaved

“leaved” to “left”

What work, I thought to myself, while the hackles continued to gu up.

The wha?

rumbling while it idled in the center of circular room.

“of a circular room”, “of the circular room” whichever.

and assigned them positioning around the ring as well.

How about change “positioning” to “locations” just to change it up. The previous sentence has positions as well as the following one.


One word.

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