satisfied if they never again had to cast their gaze eastward.
Sounds off, change "if" to "that" or was this not a certainty? Not sure about the dungeon organization.
I leaned heavily on the goodwill others in order to keep the machine humming.
"goodwill in others" or "goodwill from others"
cared more about the menial work that an individual's mental health?
Change "that" to "than"
Personal responsibility was a common theme in my process plan, but so, too, was another, equally important concept:
Alright Shatner, do you really pause that much reading this sentence? Remove commas after "so" and "too"