I lifted my headphones off just as the sounds of Blessing of Might and Arcane Intellect echoed in the distance, and I gave my son a foreboding “Yes?”, intent on conveying the severity of time at this very moment. I expected a request of ice cream or a new movie to be queued up.
‘Dad, there’s someone at the door. He says he’s having a heart attack.’
My headphones hit the floor.
Algalon hit a truck
Hit like* a truck
helped him to the couch several inside.
several feet?
The stove ablaze, the player recounts as the boss’s health trickles down, staying just long enough to secure loot before brandishing a fire extinguisher.
‘The stove ablaze, the player recounts the boss’s health trickling down…’
Ironbound Proto-Drakes
Formatting: include the ‘s’ in the hyperlink text.
and so thumbed a text back to Blain,
‘and so I thumbed a text back to Blain:’
on-the-fly
No dashes.
We survived the first transition, but a series of mishaps led to a healer death;
Replace the semicolon with a period.
heart-attacks
No dash.
Am I a bad person if someone showed up on my door drooling I would have tried to get them the hell out rather than, “hey yeah come on in and drool/die on my furniture”?
No…because you’re not the only person to have asked me that.
Gonna refrain from rolling this one up. The sentence already has two "I"s; if the reader doesn’t know who did it by this point in the sentence, fuck 'em.
All others are good and rolled up.