The stove ablaze, the player recounts as the boss’s health trickles down, staying just long enough to secure loot before brandishing a fire extinguisher.
‘The stove ablaze, the player recounts the boss’s health trickling down…’
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and so thumbed a text back to Blain,
‘and so I thumbed a text back to Blain:’
We survived the first transition, but a series of mishaps led to a healer death;
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Am I a bad person if someone showed up on my door drooling I would have tried to get them the hell out rather than, “hey yeah come on in and drool/die on my furniture”?
No…because you’re not the only person to have asked me that.
Gonna refrain from rolling this one up. The sentence already has two "I"s; if the reader doesn’t know who did it by this point in the sentence, fuck 'em.
All others are good and rolled up.