I’d scan blog posts from guilds throughout that final year of WotLK, chock full of frustrated guild leaders. Months of work wasted on bosses like…Freya?? Sartharion?? It was true. While Descendants of Draenor buckled in to begin work on our first kill of 25-Man Lich King (normal!), there were still guilds that hadn’t yet completed Naxxramas.
Even though I felt confident that Blizzard had reached exactly the right balance in Wrath, the overwhelming majority continued to prove me wrong.
while Mangetsu’s Seeds of Corruption flew past Mature’s shoulders, igniting the Spirits behind me.
kinda weird, as you have control of your toon again. “my shoulders”? Especially since you follow it up with “igniting the Spirits behind me.”
One of many opinions on Ensidia’s exploiting The Lich King encounter
The first image is less of an opinion and more explaining the world first kill.
still held little credibility
Change ‘held’ to ‘had’ just for redundancy’s sake.
Many of us had had first-hand experience with the raids of yore
I know you are using past tense here but the sentence reads the same with one less ‘had’ and reads a bit less awkward maybe? Up to you.
so the only way to do master them
Remove ‘do’
healers instinctively wanted to cleans the disease away
‘Cleans’ is missing an ‘e’
During this transition, Remorseless Winter was not the only thing that raged. Raging Spirits would spawn
Tanks needed to move quickly, picking them up and positioning them as to not cause additional strain to the healers, while DPS burned the spirits away as fast as possible.
‘Tanks needed to move quickly in positioning them as to not cause…’ Less is more.
lynchpin
I’ve always seen it spelled ‘linchpin’ maybe just America’s overzealous PC crowd.
pluck various players
‘plucking’
The melee and tanks off to the far edge of the platform away from me.
Ok, did they do something? There’s no action in this sentence, reads like a fragment.
It’s a link to the entire article; I’m not going to cap a screenshot that’s an enormous vertical rectangle to capture the contents of the entire article.
All other changes good and rolled up.