High Time for Heroics


#1

World of Warcraft is interesting. It starts like that, just like any other game. As time goes on, a potential alternate future emerges. Your efforts are no longer directed solely inward. What you do in-game has repercussions on the virtual community around you. And while it may be true that you are always following a subtle path of self-satisfaction, in growing your own prestige, others reap the benefits of your success, growing in kind. You login so that others may become powerful.


Outline for Patch 4.0
#2

That wasn’t wrong – that’s games.

Sounds better as “gaming”

The constant presence of Fred’s holy paladin was now exclusively resto shaman.

So Fred used to be on his holy paladin but was now on a resto sham? Maybe outline this a bit better: “The previously constant presence of Fred’s holy paladin was now exclusively replaced by his resto shaman.”

compelling her to some life saving spells for a change.

“compelling her to cast some…”

I encouraged her to pursue it, as I had an equal challenge to have to deal with, and it wasn’t to simply stave off attrition.

“I encouraged her to pursue it, as I had an equal challenge to deal with, and it wasn’t simply staving off attrition.”

and and a disgusted air of superiority.

Remove extra “and”

forcing DSP to peel off

DPS